Angel of Death

Hey there Jiggy! I like this but I think Clo says it best. Ooh. Ooh. This had such a fuzzy feeling of nostalgia about it. You know, ever since you've ...

Hey there! I'm Angel and I shall be your reviewer today. To tell you the truth, this is really jumbled or not all together. You have two stanzas that don't ...

I agree, that haircut rocks Snoink! And Tiff you're soo pretty and I love love love that hat, it really makes your eyes pop. *steals hat from June who stole ...

11. Breathe life into their lungs So I decided to look for pictures of my characters, just thought it would be fun: Teresa Izzy Warren Mr. Gardner

Hey there! Wow, this was really funny! I like playing the game but it sucks that they don't speak English or any real languages for that matter and then they ...

Hello there! I usually don't read fantasy but your Prologue was very promising. It seemed realistic, and that's one quality I like when I read a story, no matter what ...

Hello Ash, This was really good and I only found one nit-pick other than the ones KJ pointed out. She was going to better her life, if not for but ...

It's a rather good portrait of Sir Jigster but you're forgetting a little purple. Yep, it would make this drawing the mirror image, me thinks. *gold star* Ta, ~Angel

He gave me his crooked grin and said, "We ejaculate rainbows." Epic. xD Signed, Angel, I devoted Twilight fan *runs way*

Hey KJ! This was really really good. I couldn't stop reading it. As always, I couldn't find any looming mistakes but a quick read through wouldn't hurt. Already this seems ...

Hello Ari! Oh, this definitely deserves a gold star, and so speechless and oh.... Okay, I'm good now. There really isn't anything wrong with this. It was written beautifully and ...

Hey Jiggy! Well, Blink already did all the technical stuff so I'll say that this was written well and it was quite dull at the same time, which I'm sure ...

10. A Good Way to Stall I feel this might be the one. I have a lot of good ideas for If Love is not Enough and I don't think ...

Hey Hannah! This was good. I didn't see any looming grammatical problems, so it looks flawless. Though I am wondering about your two characters and what is going to happen ...

Hey there Night! I liked this and you write well, but I don't think this was executed to it's full extent. First off, everything just whirred by. Everyone likes to ...